What’s wrong with poetry?
#1
There have been some interesting points made on Serious of late. Interesting to me, that is…I cannot speak for others, in spite of my wish to constantly so do.
What has emerged from some recent postings will not be new to everyone…and in truth are but a rediscovery for me. Nonetheless, as a discussion thread starting point, I think there is often a need to restate old beliefs if only to test for contemporary validity.

So here I go with a lofty proclamation. Discuss:

Poetry is sufficient unto itself, but not all that is written is born of a need to be considered as poetry by the writer, nor is it deserving of being defined as poetry by the reader.

I will kick this one off.
First of all, any “lofty proclamation” needs to be removed from elitism and brought down to earth in order that all who wish to offer opinion can do so, regardless of their perceived, or self-perceived, ability to comprehend the discussion. In this case, the most difficult hurdle to get over is the first…what is poetry?
I should say right now that this is a very old chestnut and not one I want to roast again, but for understandable reasons “poets” continually believe that they are redefining the poetic discipline by their own unique and perceptive imaginings. Yes…imaginings. In fifty years of writing poetry (by any and all definitions, I got older and wiser!) what I want to make clear is that nothing is new under the still un-named sun; ipso facto what I am about to say is only a restatement of often noted truisms.

Here goes.

Poetry is sufficient unto itself… what this says at first glance is that whatever you care to consider as poetry IS poetry by your definition. The “you” here is the writer. Acceptance of this statement is very insular. It is also temptingly liberating. If we permit the individual’s definition of poetic endeavour to become a tested norm we end up with silent symphonies and dead sheep in formaldehyde, as has happened in the world of art. Each of us must decide if this is where we want to be.
The problem is one of peer persuasion. If a genre-to-be poet can find enough followers to buy in to acceptance of his/her defined “poetry” then a kind of self-perpetuating myth is born. Usually short lived, these flashes of novelty become extinguished by the deoxygenated atmosphere of the closed community.
Sometimes, though, through a tiny fissure, a new “something” emerges and escapes the confines of the vessel which the “establishment” has created over a very long period of time. So if there is a question as to what “poetry” is to you, you need only decide whether you are inside or outside the metaphorical vivarium. I find no regret in deciding, after a considerable time, it is better to be inside looking out than outside looking in; but to reach this conclusion you have to have experienced both the options.


…not all that is written is born of a need to be considered as poetry by the writer

Some of us write to be accepted as poets…some of us are poets and just write. There is, however, another group…a very big group. I wish they would all go away and start a club of their own…not because they are all bad people or even all bad poets, but because they do not know which they are themselves. They write because they are burdened by their own thoughts and must tell us all about it. I have heard it all before. Do not, though, be critical of what seems to be the insensitive dismissal of the cravings of the needy. This is ONLY about poetry…not people. The sad fact is, emotional writing is much improved by the great journey to experience but it is made ACCEPTABLE as poetry by paying for the ticket. By all means self-harm…and write about it; overdose…and write about it; lose your lover…and write about it; commit murder, mayem, rape, sodomy, buggery, sodomobuggery…and write about it. Just do not expect that what you tip onto the paper is automatically poetic. It is more often not, but it sometimes is. When it is, come back inside the vivarium…but only if you want to be a poet. If you do not feel this need, then just keep doing what you are doing. At any given time there are more “outside” than “inside”…but there are many more want in than want out. Once your poetry is written because it is beautiful, emotive, warm, funny, clever, complex, sad, happy, purposeful…oh, how I could go on…it becomes its own reward. Once the soft but tested rules are learned, poetry becomes a mission in itself. For “mission” read hope, distraction, comfort and, without actually becoming emetic, a joy to the reader AND the writer.

..nor is it deserving of being defined as poetry by the reader.
Of course, that depends upon the reader. I am talking about me. I said so at the start. When I write poetry it is because I want to express myself using the medium of poetic discipline. Because I am a free spirit, I can imagine ANYTHING…but there are some things which I can write about which flow not from imagination, but from memory. I treat the two streams as outlets from the same reservoir. Once I have the temerity to think that you, the reader, may be thirsty enough to drink my drink, I begin the process of purification. By that, I do not mean sanitization. What I try to do is to make the unpalatable palatable and that is all. I am trying to blend two streams in to an acceptable one. I am stretching this metaphor way too far, but I hope that the end product can always say on the label… “ Contains Poetry”.
Best,
tectak
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#2
I haven't much time so I will condense my arguments. Is it poetry just because the writer says it's poetry? Sure, if you like. Is it good poetry? Not on your fucking life.

Are you being clever by not bothering with any accepted conventions, arbitrarily spewing words in whatever order takes the least effort and then excusing it by referring to yourself as an "innovator" or "avant garde"? Not on your fucking life.

I love to see people experiment with the form and function of poetry. I love to see new techniques being applied and people writing outside their comfort zones. I do not love to see people with 24 seconds' experience blustering about how their lack of knowledge is "raw" and "honest". The reality is, we've seen the same mistakes made a million times and have heard the same bullshit arguments for years.

Sorry to be harsh. No I'm not. I've seen it too often and it's starting to get really, really old.
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#3
Aww sweety! Just write poetry! (and thereby stop the virginal bloody fuck wasting our time (including your's). You have some fine metaphors embedded in even this unworthy of you rant: "metaphorical vivarium".)

Ok, just to please you a teenieweeniebitchy:

to quote Monsieur- lui-meme:
"By all means self-harm…and write about it; overdose…and write about it; lose your lover…and write about it; commit murder, may*em, rape, sodomy, buggery, sodomobuggery…and write about it." <--- which you just did. Got it! ;-)
etc blabla.

your's always

sg
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* -h- anyone?

postscriptum: Don't hesitate, once you have a real point to make, to address your peers again.

pps.: So you are the arbiter cuzzzz you scribbled on for half a century? Haha! How convincing (but to whom?)!
And: how does that qualify you?
Why waste our time with these bombastic bletherings?

And now seriously: once you enter a workshop, you leave the "genius" attitude at the wardrobe. we are here to learn. and i improve just as much by commenting than by being commented upon.

point made. case closed.

cheers

moi
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#4
(03-11-2013, 07:59 PM)serge gurkski Wrote:  Aww sweety! Just write poetry! (and thereby stop the virginal bloody fuck wasting our time (including your's). You have some fine metaphors embedded in even this unworthy of you rant: "metaphorical vivarium".)

Ok, just to please you a teenieweeniebitchy:

to quote Monsieur- lui-meme:
"By all means self-harm…and write about it; overdose…and write about it; lose your lover…and write about it; commit murder, may*em, rape, sodomy, buggery, sodomobuggery…and write about it." <--- which you just did. Got it! ;-)
etc blabla.

your's always

sg
----
* -h- anyone?

postscriptum: Don't hesitate, once you have a real point to make, to address your peers again.

pps.: So you are the arbiter cuzzzz you scribbled on for half a century? Haha! How convincing (but to whom?)!
And: how does that qualify you?
Why waste our time with these bombastic bletherings?

And now seriously: once you enter a workshop, you leave the "genius" attitude at the wardrobe. we are here to learn. and i improve just as much by commenting than by being commented upon.

point made. case closed.

cheers

moi
You'll do for me ,sergeHysterical
In ANY discussion forum, I would rather have you in my room and pissed than be alone in my room and sober!
Best,
tectak

(03-11-2013, 07:59 PM)serge gurkski Wrote:  Aww sweety! Just write poetry! (and thereby stop the virginal bloody fuck wasting our time (including your's). You have some fine metaphors embedded in even this unworthy of you rant: "metaphorical vivarium".)

Ok, just to please you a teenieweeniebitchy:

to quote Monsieur- lui-meme:
"By all means self-harm…and write about it; overdose…and write about it; lose your lover…and write about it; commit murder, may*em, rape, sodomy, buggery, sodomobuggery…and write about it." <--- which you just did. Got it! ;-)
etc blabla.

your's always

sg
----
* -h- anyone?

postscriptum: Don't hesitate, once you have a real point to make, to address your peers again.

pps.: So you are the arbiter cuzzzz you scribbled on for half a century? Haha! How convincing (but to whom?)!
And: how does that qualify you?
Why waste our time with these bombastic bletherings?

And now seriously: once you enter a workshop, you leave the "genius" attitude at the wardrobe. we are here to learn. and i improve just as much by commenting than by being commented upon.

point made. case closed.

cheers

moi
You'll do for me ,sergeHystericalAmen but serging on ad hominem...and I know how you hate that!
In ANY discussion forum, I would rather have you in my room and pissed than be alone in my room and sober!
Best,
tectak
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#5
i am in your team. we'll show these buggers. grrrroar!

(was nice to translate a bit of Martial (this old bugger, ,-)) , cleared the air somewhat and also made me think of Ted Hughes (but not of Seneca. ,-))) )
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(03-11-2013, 07:59 PM)serge gurkski Wrote:  Aww sweety! Just write poetry! (and thereby stop the virginal bloody fuck wasting our time (including your's). You have some fine metaphors embedded in even this unworthy of you rant: "metaphorical vivarium".)

Ok, just to please you a teenieweeniebitchy:

to quote Monsieur- lui-meme:
"By all means self-harm…and write about it; overdose…and write about it; lose your lover…and write about it; commit murder, may*em, rape, sodomy, buggery, sodomobuggery…and write about it." <--- which you just did. Got it! ;-)
etc blabla.

your's always

sg
----
* -h- anyone?

postscriptum: Don't hesitate, once you have a real point to make, to address your peers again.

pps.: So you are the arbiter cuzzzz you scribbled on for half a century? Haha! How convincing (but to whom?)!
And: how does that qualify you?
Why waste our time with these bombastic bletherings?

And now seriously: once you enter a workshop, you leave the "genius" attitude at the wardrobe. we are here to learn. and i improve just as much by commenting than by being commented upon.

point made. case closed.

cheers

moi

Methinks Thou Dost Protest Too Much, serge!!
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#7
you opened the gates, lol
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#8
what's wrong with poetry?

in nutshell...nothing, the problem lays with the would be poet. the fuss always seems to be about what the poet who wrote it meant, how they suffer for their art. on a site like this i#m really only interested if the poet is trying to improve, i'm long past anything impressing me, be it poetry or anything else. i love seeing someone do an edit or think about how they can improve. what for me defies logic, is someone posting a poem then after getting feedback asking if uch and such is allowed here. they ask because people leave feedback as to why something doesn't work. write any crazy way you like but don't then question whether or not you're allowed to. write as you will and give feedback as will. wehn you don't do or allow either you create the wrongness in poetry.

we should all be allowed to dislike something in your poem, don't be so fucking shocked if someone gives feedback about the silly fucking ideas you experiment with. who knows some may think what you did works. it's a lottory don't cry if you don't win.


think skin is what's wrong woth poetry...too many poets have thin skin and an elevated idea as to their own greatness.
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#9
have you noticed we are all preaching to the choir here. Just a friendly hint. :-)
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(03-12-2013, 12:51 AM)billy Wrote:  what's wrong with poetry?

in nutshell...nothing, the problem lays with the would be poet. the fuss always seems to be about what the poet who wrote it meant, how they suffer for their art. on a site like this i#m really only interested if the poet is trying to improve, i'm long past anything impressing me, be it poetry or anything else. i love seeing someone do an edit or think about how they can improve. what for me defies logic, is someone posting a poem then after getting feedback asking if uch and such is allowed here. they ask because people leave feedback as to why something doesn't work. write any crazy way you like but don't then question whether or not you're allowed to. write as you will and give feedback as will. wehn you don't do or allow either you create the wrongness in poetry.

we should all be allowed to dislike something in your poem, don't be so fucking shocked if someone gives feedback about the silly fucking ideas you experiment with. who knows some may think what you did works. it's a lottory don't cry if you don't win.


think skin is what's wrong woth poetry...too many poets have thin skin and an elevated idea as to their own greatness.

Now that's what I call "case closed". Amen to that , too, billy.
Worryingly, though (to me) is the never ending (hopefully) stream of mixed ability contributors in Serious who ask for crit, post once, get crit...then vanish. I envisage a kind of Elephant's Graveyard full of souls dispossesed of all reason to live..who abandon poetry and take up butterfly collecting or needlepoint. That is not a measured response to crit and indicates to me an ulterior motive for posting...the wish for respect, recognition and self-aggrandisement is high on their agenda. I would be kind to them all but that reeks of positive discrimination. I would not wish that on anyone, particularly me...which is why I am here and not in another place. To improve in poetry is the reason we post...not praise: though faint praise is fiendishly effective...most do not see it and those who do keep quiet and keep posting.
Best,
tectak
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#11
you can take any words put them together and make poetry..regardless of intellectual content,set rules and forms..passion,expression,feelings put into any words can relate to you or anyone who reads and determines there merit as a piece or a list of words.
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#12
we're trying to alleviate that particular problem, (posting willy nilly in serious )but it's not as easy as one would think. i do think we're garnering some decent poets though and bit by bit their numbers will grow. personally, i prefer someone to tell me what's wrong so i don't keep sperting out shite Big Grin. i struggle to understand how people get so easily pissed when the bad stuff is pointed out Big Grin.
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#13
(03-12-2013, 01:24 AM)escorial Wrote:  you can take any words put them together and make poetry..regardless of intellectual content,set rules and forms..passion,expression,feelings put into any words can relate to you or anyone who reads and determines there merit as a piece or a list of words.

El Real Sitio de San Lorenzo de El Escorial. ,-)
you can also take any stones together and make castles for kings regardless: they maybe marble or just vile rocks. The real stuff will always attract the right kind of readership.


serge
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#14
in every dictionary there is enough words to compile what many would consider classic poems that we all would recognise....but it's the words I pick ,you pick that determines a poems place in the world or thread.
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MSDS for Turpentine OR You can take any words, put them together and make them poetry

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Well, what do you know, it works Hysterical
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#16
when somethink cannot evolve music,dancing,opera or poetry then are we left with just set rules and format to produce a product or a piece of unique work.
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#17
Nobody is suggesting poetry can't evolve -- just that making basic grammatical errors, filling poems with cliches and failing to take criticism does not constitute evolution.
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#18
how can you determine what evolution is ,until it's happened or about to...
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#19
TL:DR all of it.

devolution might be the word you're looking for.
I'll be there in a minute.
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#20
It's not evolution if it's repeating the same thing that's been done a million times in the past.
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