NaPM April 4 2013

[milo]

*ballade

Nicely done Mikey

*Damn the distinctions!

And thanks.

yah, I didn't point it out because leanne camps the forums but I also enjoyed your ballade.

[billy]

i've seen a few members say "not on par and not up to much" etc,
it's the taking part that really does count. keep it up and well done.

---

A fairytale of gangster kids
immigrants from round the world.
Violence at an early age;
a cupcake on a staircase
toilet love and crooked cops.
Friends for ever, bound in honour
a Greek tragedy out of a railway station
20 years later, steeped in new traditions
still children in a fairytale
dying for the story

[NakedBear]

*Damn the distinctions!

And thanks.

yah, I didn't point it out because leanne camps the forums but I also enjoyed your ballade.

I'm glad you enjoyed it, milo. :thumbsup: (<-- we need more emoticons! One or two more, and I'll be able to express my entire emotional range. )

[milo]

The Dude abides;
in sandals and a dressing gown,
The Dude abides.
No urinating thug decides
the game. This is Lebowski's town --
while Walter plots to take them down,
The Dude abides.

oops, just read the "10 lines or more" requirement... oh well, I'll do three extra next time.

the 10 line requirement is mostly because I am a lazy procrastinator. Knowing myself the way I do, I also know that I would most likely just bang out 5 minute triolets for every one. That, and I was hoping for some dizains, but no one is taking the hint.