sound of crunching

[rayheinrich]

   old pond
   -
   flowerchild's water bed

[Erthona]

The Sun
hippie's
electricity

[rayheinrich]

    old pond
    navel oranges
    floating
 
 

[Erthona]

old navy
in pond of
floating oranges

[Wildcard]

old oranges
floating
in my navel

[Erthona]

My naval reserve
of old oranges floating
...in the rain...dying

[billy]

dangling participles
what are they?
billy wants to know.

[rayheinrich]

   winter participles
   dangling
   shrunken oranges

[Wildcard]

winter part-
iciple
part snow

[Erthona]

A dangling participle/misplaced modifier,
as useful and as pretty as,
a bald head, hair dryer.

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winter ice
particles fall
as snow

part tickles
if its ice
down the back

[rayheinrich]

   falling from heaven
   the dangling participle
   feels the snow

[Erthona]

The Fallen, from heaven,
participlate into the snow,
dangling, bungling, wangling

[Wildcard]

dangling from heaven,
the participle
snows

[Erthona]

snowing from heaven,
participle dangling,
participle not!

[Wildcard]

participle, participle
bish, boom, ba!
participle, participle
ra, ra, ra!

[Erthona]

rackity, rackity, ree,
kick'em in the knee,
rackity, rackity, rass,
kick'em in the other knee!

[Wildcard]

Ye olde element of surprise

There once was a chick with one nipple
That dangled just like a participle
It hung there in such an odd manner
While playing the star spangled banner

[Erthona]

There once was a girl with one breast,
it stuck straight out from her chest,
her boyfriend said, two breast are fun,
but I'm participle to one,
and the way that one dangles is best!

[rayheinrich]

   old participle
   a frog jumps in
   (sound of) one breast flapping

[Erthona]

one alternate lifestyle frog
says to another alternate lifestyle frog
hmmm, we really do taste like chicken!