"The charm."
#1
A rare charm
When my melancholy,
Alone, slowly dances.
One vagueness mixes with another.
Disjointed thoughts are gone.
They changed by a blurred image -
Like raindrops on a misty mirror
Of my dreamy mind.
I push away reality,
I listen to the rain.
I charmed with this melody
With one word: pain, pain, pain ...

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#2
You captured the mood of melancholy perfectly here... light but beautiful aches. Thanks for the read
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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#3
Thank you so much, Addy!
R.Y.
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