11-05-2022, 06:11 AM
Words ain't worth their weight in dirt
Action's worth in words
Does is and nothin' more
fillin' a hole
Action's worth in words
Does is and nothin' more
fillin' a hole
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Grave digga
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11-05-2022, 06:11 AM
Words ain't worth their weight in dirt
Action's worth in words Does is and nothin' more fillin' a hole
11-06-2022, 11:56 AM
(11-05-2022, 06:11 AM)Semicircle Wrote: Words are ain’t worth their weight in dirt Hi slicer- The first two lines ate pretty good, but the last two are a bit of a let down. Not sure what to suggest, but I think going for the rhyme doesn’t help. Mark
11-08-2022, 07:17 AM
Action is a word without recognition
epitaph Thanks for the suggestions Mark. |
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