questions

[Erthona]

The first response more true and genuine
more often than not correct;
whereas the second thought is not;
where doubt has plied its course.

[Tiger the Lion]

The first response more true and genuine
more often than not correct;
whereas the second thought is not;
where doubt has plied its course.

I take this as a vote for intuition over analytics.  There is certainly an argument to be made. At least that is my gut response. I think the last line would be better served with "now" or "once" in place of "where."

[dukealien]

The first response more true and genuine
more often than not correct;
whereas the second thought is not;
where doubt has plied its course.

And after both, without deciding, remember that the right answer is usually "C."

[busker]

The first response more true and genuine
more often than not correct;
whereas the second thought is not;
where doubt has plied its course.

This is certainly true of writing poetry
First drafts beat second drafts anyday

[Erthona]

Thanks for your responses guys. Not much of a poem, but it seemed to want to be written.

dale