Lyrics "In Justice"
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In Justice

Question:
the jury has made its decision.
I'm clearly in need of correction.
They're give me one year probation,
Deferred adjudication.
For what?

My parents
acting like they're so embarrassed.
Like, why must their son be the strangest? 
His behavior is simply outrageous.
Don't touch him he might be contagious!
For what?

Possession
of a subliminal sensation
for a temporary duration,
a method of relaxation
for a vivid imagination
For what? Bullshit....

I smell Bullshit!
Bullshit Bullshit

Complications:
it's on all my job applications,
they've suspended my drivers license;
I walk to community service,
a mandatory furnace.
For what?

Salvation?
In giving up my education
to save up the money to pay them
and spiral into a depression,
a spiritual suffocation.
For what?

Face it!
The only consolation
is sharing this information.
If you'd allow me to make a suggestion,
STOP CRIMINALIZING YOUR CHILDREN
It's bullshit!

What on Earth are you afraid of?
Why can't you see that the punishment
is by far more dangerous?!
It's bullshit...

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As a spoken word piece, or a rap, this will work really well. It's simple enough in its message, which is enhanced nicely by really good sonics and a strong rhythm. I was reciting it with an Eminem song in my head but I don't know which one (you know that thing where you hear the tune but you can't get the song because you've got other words in your head and they're messing with you? No? Just me then. More coffee.)

Personally I'd say you can cut some bullshit. Overusing it can reduce its power -- plus it's not a great word to say repeatedly as it just doesn't sit trippingly on the tongue and all that.

As long as the little bastards stop coming into my classroom so high they can't even sit on a chair straight, I'm all for legalisation.
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(10-08-2016, 06:24 AM)Leanne Wrote:  As a spoken word piece, or a rap, this will work really well.  It's simple enough in its message, which is enhanced nicely by really good sonics and a strong rhythm.  I was reciting it with an Eminem song in my head but I don't know which one (you know that thing where you hear the tune but you can't get the song because you've got other words in your head and they're messing with you?  No?  Just me then.  More coffee.) I just can't imagine you singing Eminem to yourself

Personally I'd say you can cut some bullshit.  Overusing it can reduce its power -- plus it's not a great word to say repeatedly as it just doesn't sit trippingly on the tongue and all that.good point I've wondered about that

As long as the little bastards stop coming into my classroom so high they can't even sit on a chair straight, I'm all for legalisation.I'm dying lol
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