Haiku

[heslopian]

synthetic flower
at the top of the staircase
tangled coats below

[billy]

for me synthetic flowers is a stretch for the seasonal word.
and the image or intended image feels a little vague.

[heslopian]

Yeah I thought "synthetic" might be a problem. I literally saw the fake flower at the top of my staircase, and the tangled coats below, then wrote that down. Pretty lazy I know
Thanks for the feedback, Billy

[billy]

not that lazy, a haiku is supposed to be an image or slice of something

[addy]

I personally think that "synthetic flower" and "coats" used together made a good seasonal image but maybe it needs more distinction. ( I had trouble deciding if this was fall or winter). But still I liked the look of the scene as it was invoked in my head

[heslopian]

Thanks for the kind words and feedback, Addy Yeah, the image was kind of shallow, I think, which is no doubt why it lacked distinction.