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rayheinrich Offline
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#1
03-18-2014, 02:59 AM


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                        Fukushima
                        flounders
                        flounders



flouder - season word for summer
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#2
03-18-2014, 03:40 AM
the most minimalistic and yet poignant thing I've ever read. Don't you dare change a word.
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#3
03-18-2014, 04:44 AM
Certainly not a fluke of nature!

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#4
03-18-2014, 11:17 AM
(03-18-2014, 04:44 AM)Erthona Wrote:  Certainly not a fluke of nature!
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I bared my sole.
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#5
03-18-2014, 11:24 AM
Its the Chinese Weather Machine!
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