commitment haiku

[jjhunter]

the art of haiku
juxtaposing thought goes here
is quickly mastered

[Volaticus]

Hi,
I think you posted this in the wrong part of the forum.
And it's common courtesy (and one of the forum rules) to leave feedback on other people's poetry too.

[billy]

the art of haiku
juxtaposing thought goes here
is quickly mastered

i've never heard of commitment haiku. it reads as a non haiku maybe a senryu.
also, give feedback elsewhere or leave the sight /admin