hi, this is my first post to this website, please comment on my poem, i wrote this yesterday, please be honest, thank you 
Bandages help to cover up the track-marks
from the predator that climbed up with syringes
filled with dense conviction
break a leg, thats what i said to the blotter head
to find an equation for vivid perception with convincing enlightenment
my faith drives god into delirium
on a path to find an ancient with wisdom
a tranquilizing effect takes over the mundane
oasis merged with that mirage plays a vital role in picasso's art
blind men travel in time capsules
a seat to the past with vision-less memories
Bandages help to cover up the track-marks
from the predator that climbed up with syringes
filled with dense conviction
break a leg, thats what i said to the blotter head
to find an equation for vivid perception with convincing enlightenment
my faith drives god into delirium
on a path to find an ancient with wisdom
a tranquilizing effect takes over the mundane
oasis merged with that mirage plays a vital role in picasso's art
blind men travel in time capsules
a seat to the past with vision-less memories
