05-21-2012, 02:26 PM
Thanks addy,
Yes, the idea was to juxtapose the silly idea that one can control life to such an extent as is diagrammed here with the prissiness of the sing song sort of Hallmark verse. The idea was to create a sort of an eerie backdrop for the cynicism. Each day gets its own coffin. You know, kind of the weirdness one feels about the Aunt who is just a little too much over the top with the flower prints, sachets, and cliche way of speaking. You wonder what is really behind all of that.
Billy,
"it does infer the 1st person has some pretty good secrets though." That's it in a nutshell (cliche, I know
). I just always wonder when a person feels the need to control every little thing, beyond of course, a girl who is about to get married (then it is expected). You were right it did need the "all". so I put it in, thanks.
Dale
Yes, the idea was to juxtapose the silly idea that one can control life to such an extent as is diagrammed here with the prissiness of the sing song sort of Hallmark verse. The idea was to create a sort of an eerie backdrop for the cynicism. Each day gets its own coffin. You know, kind of the weirdness one feels about the Aunt who is just a little too much over the top with the flower prints, sachets, and cliche way of speaking. You wonder what is really behind all of that.
Billy,
"it does infer the 1st person has some pretty good secrets though." That's it in a nutshell (cliche, I know
). I just always wonder when a person feels the need to control every little thing, beyond of course, a girl who is about to get married (then it is expected). You were right it did need the "all". so I put it in, thanks.Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.