Virgin Girls

[Indie]

Thanks Tectak , this is useful, I'll have a better look at it when I'm not so tired, but I get your points.

My punctuation seems to be up for debate, with some saying I need less and some saying I need more. My over-punctuation is possibly a bad habit from my story writing days, not my lack of it. Cutting back on punctuation is a pretty recent thing for me. My punctuation may very well be confused at the moment, it's a work in progress.

Thanks again.