01-20-2012, 05:36 AM
I like the poem as-is, Jack. It's a nicely done piece that seems very matter-of-fact on the surface but is layered with many different feelings and draws a lot of memories out of me. There are more types of charlatans that this poem makes me think of (and that's a good thing) because it reverberates of the dual nature (cowardly and bold) of this breed.
Thanks for sharing.
Thanks for sharing.

