12-17-2011, 10:47 PM
Thanks for all your kind feedback, guys
I like your idea about adding images to the first stanza, Philatone. As for the last three lines, I may try and weave them more seamlessly into the poem so they seem less like a summation.
I like your idea about adding images to the first stanza, Philatone. As for the last three lines, I may try and weave them more seamlessly into the poem so they seem less like a summation.
"We believe that we invent symbols. The truth is that they invent us; we are their creatures, shaped by their hard, defining edges." - Gene Wolfe