12-12-2011, 04:09 PM
Well - in everyone - but that doesn't include me. Is that what they do? Knock on your door and say 'I can put you in touch with your departed loved ones' - how weird.
That love - needs a word before it 'Saying/declaring/assuring/promising' whatever.
The sensible - take away 'the' and change line to 'sensible people/folk/minds/ whatever
Though - isn't needed
Who dares blame the gullible?
Their naivety doesn't come from stupidity
but from pain and visions of the gulf
extending after death.
......... I'm guessing that this was a straight from the brain to the page thingy. My suggestions are sent with love.
That love - needs a word before it 'Saying/declaring/assuring/promising' whatever.
The sensible - take away 'the' and change line to 'sensible people/folk/minds/ whatever
Though - isn't needed
Who dares blame the gullible?
Their naivety doesn't come from stupidity
but from pain and visions of the gulf
extending after death.
......... I'm guessing that this was a straight from the brain to the page thingy. My suggestions are sent with love.