10-11-2011, 11:07 AM
the issue i have is that; too many words ending with ing in the space of a few lines feels week, unless they are used for a specific purpose and intended. in truth that was the reason i mentioned it. i did call them gerunds but that was my mistake, lots of ing ends often waste space.
i know i have been guilty of inging myself in the past (inging, is that a verb? hehe)
i know i have been guilty of inging myself in the past (inging, is that a verb? hehe)