07-29-2011, 12:23 AM
Heslopian
There are no such thing as imaginary worlds
***Should this read as "things".
or "is no such".
The places spoke about in books,
lands of elves and lion gods,
are patched together
from our own
boring universe, like a
*** loses the flow with boring universe, picks up again with the dress.
poor girl's dress
stitched into being with carpet samples.
***Good image here, like the "poor" and "samples" together. really complimentary.
We as humans cannot grasp
a plain beyond our own. We have no knowledge
of what we can't see. Thus
fantasy
is really truth we make mosaics of.
good line here really original I think. Reminds me of ur doughnuts.
Nice read, lots to think about
David
There are no such thing as imaginary worlds
***Should this read as "things".
or "is no such".
The places spoke about in books,
lands of elves and lion gods,
are patched together
from our own
boring universe, like a
*** loses the flow with boring universe, picks up again with the dress.
poor girl's dress
stitched into being with carpet samples.
***Good image here, like the "poor" and "samples" together. really complimentary.
We as humans cannot grasp
a plain beyond our own. We have no knowledge
of what we can't see. Thus
fantasy
is really truth we make mosaics of.
good line here really original I think. Reminds me of ur doughnuts.
Nice read, lots to think about
David