11-12-2010, 05:27 PM
Just my peanuts worth ...
First of all you guys are being waaaay too critical and hard on yourselves as most artists are.
And ya I'd go for the Early Works title ... because if writing such as Heslopian just posted is considered shitty then I will never attempt to write.
I really enjoyed Sweet Alice, it's full of heart and emotion and easily related to.
I've read poems by a few of the greats only to feel lost, and thinking ... wtf? (I do apologize for my lack of appreciation and intellect
). My appreciation is more for writings that go straight to the heart and cause one to feel.
First of all you guys are being waaaay too critical and hard on yourselves as most artists are.
And ya I'd go for the Early Works title ... because if writing such as Heslopian just posted is considered shitty then I will never attempt to write.
I really enjoyed Sweet Alice, it's full of heart and emotion and easily related to.
I've read poems by a few of the greats only to feel lost, and thinking ... wtf? (I do apologize for my lack of appreciation and intellect
). My appreciation is more for writings that go straight to the heart and cause one to feel.
You give to the world when you're giving your best to somebody else.