06-07-2010, 10:26 AM
(06-06-2010, 02:01 PM)Loveblind Wrote: I`m a prisoner of my mindthe word noggin feels a little out of place LB
trapped in my own thoughts
trying to dodge vulgar
comments from the past
that are still in effect
that still haunt my mind
I`m locked in deep
suffocated by words
that viciously despair
my noggin
I`m a prisoner of my mind
waiting to break free
would the last two lines be better on their own.