A coastal hike

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A coastal hike (Edit 1.0)

I shall take my poems and go
to tea trees shaking in the rain
falling since yesterday, also
last year in pauses.
And the year before that
and the year before that
and so on till the dawn of man.
And before,
still before,
and before, until
the grass disappears,
the sea travels deep inland,
and before -

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I shall take my poems and go
to tea trees shaking in the rain
since yesterday falling, but also
last year in pauses,
and the year before that
and the year before that
and so on till the dawn of man
and still before
still before
till the grass disappears
and the sea travels deep inland.