Liminality At The Park

[JC_Chalant]

- Milo, I've never heard of entre chien et loup. Having looked it up, I love the phrase and find it apt for this piece. Appreciate the attention to sonics and notes confirming where the poem has some confusion. Absolutely valid criticism to describe how it leaves you feeling in the end; a reader's experience is always notable. Glad to hear much of it lands though. Gave me some things to consider as I re-work. Thanks for the close read.

- Roggen, thank you for the notes and suggestions. Will keep in mind on future revisions.