11-15-2025, 09:33 PM
No problem, thanks for your opinion on the piece.
It was an experiment cause I don't work that much with imagery.
I work mostly in layers.
I kept the original here; poetry is still subjective.
You may find the original better; I like both, some may like the revised.
It's all personally bound.
Still, I'm very grateful for your feedback!
It was an experiment cause I don't work that much with imagery.
I work mostly in layers.
I kept the original here; poetry is still subjective.
You may find the original better; I like both, some may like the revised.
It's all personally bound.
Still, I'm very grateful for your feedback!
I know that rhyme, rhythm, and meter are not academically standardized.
I am well aware of that, yet I primarily do free verse, and it's based on instinctual writing.
I try to avoid academic language or structure. My poems are not meant to convey a single answer.
I try to convey the unknown through minimalism, mostly dense short stanzas with many line breaks.
If you'd give a critique, please keep this in mind.
I am well aware of that, yet I primarily do free verse, and it's based on instinctual writing.
I try to avoid academic language or structure. My poems are not meant to convey a single answer.
I try to convey the unknown through minimalism, mostly dense short stanzas with many line breaks.
If you'd give a critique, please keep this in mind.