but little, does she know
after he finishes swimming
that guy he's out [guy is out,] or [that guy, he's out]
and she's still left with
her insecurities to fight
for me it's one of your better writes LB.
i wouldn't change a thing apart from what i pointed out in the last verse. well done.
ps. i put a subject warning in the heading for those who aren't keen on oral sex
after he finishes swimming
that guy he's out [guy is out,] or [that guy, he's out]
and she's still left with
her insecurities to fight
for me it's one of your better writes LB.
i wouldn't change a thing apart from what i pointed out in the last verse. well done.
ps. i put a subject warning in the heading for those who aren't keen on oral sex