05-25-2010, 11:15 AM
I really loved the nature imagery here. Spotted a spelling error (fourth stanza "put there by gods"), but nothing a quit edit won't solve.
Interesting that you compared the monolith to deception, and an enduring one at that since you described all the false faiths that were swirling around the stone. Is false faith another form of hubris that can crush innocence? Just wondering if you meant it that way too
Interesting that you compared the monolith to deception, and an enduring one at that since you described all the false faiths that were swirling around the stone. Is false faith another form of hubris that can crush innocence? Just wondering if you meant it that way too
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?