09-09-2022, 10:28 PM
"the body won't spoil" -- Lovely.
Thought of California when reading this. last two lines didn't win me over initially, but upon further reflection the contrast between 'tomorrow' and past tense 'smelt' is just jarring enough to be interesting.
Thought of California when reading this. last two lines didn't win me over initially, but upon further reflection the contrast between 'tomorrow' and past tense 'smelt' is just jarring enough to be interesting.