Next in Time (edit of To Salinger's Seymour)
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The phoebe
perched on a rock
tail twitching

about to pounce.



ver. 3
A phoebe

perched on a rock

twitching its tail

about to pounce.







ver. 2

The twitching tail

of a phoebe

perched on a rock



about to pounce.



ver. 1

Life is a cut-up

and each of us an oracle:

the twitching tail of a phoebe

perched on a rock

about to pounce.

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Next in Time (edit of To Salinger's Seymour) - by TranquillityBase - 08-12-2022, 07:16 AM
RE: To Salinger's Seymour - by Mark A Becker - 08-14-2022, 04:40 AM
RE: To Salinger's Seymour - by TranquillityBase - 08-14-2022, 08:48 PM
RE: To Salinger's Seymour - by brynmawr1 - 08-18-2022, 03:39 AM
RE: To Salinger's Seymour - by TranquillityBase - 08-18-2022, 07:33 AM
RE: To Salinger's Seymour - by brynmawr1 - 08-19-2022, 12:57 PM
RE: To Salinger's Seymour - by Mark A Becker - 08-22-2022, 03:59 AM
RE: To Salinger's Seymour - by TranquillityBase - 08-22-2022, 06:59 AM



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