02-28-2022, 03:30 AM
(08-10-2021, 06:33 AM)TranquillityBase Wrote: The sky is blue, but so what?This poem is one of the best I have seen out of your catalogue and I haven't seen many so far.
Colors that matter soak the screen
rewarding this pale retainer
with eyes infused with delight...................Delight would work better as ‘daylight ’
Me? I’m just one big pump
keeping up the flow of blood and lymph
to savor creature comforts
in hygienic peace; it’s the brain ................Now this is poetry
That circulates the electric dream
shoving aside wandering thoughts,
my head bowed down like a bull
whose skull is a solid rapture.
Pleasure without effort,
everything outside this holy view
is just distraction from the worship
of another’s gods and monsters................So true
I have much to learn from you.
Best, Semicircle

