08-11-2018, 12:08 AM
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Unregenerate Humanity
We learn that unlike rats’ or crows’
our adult neurons never split
to generate new cells: mind grows
by forming fresh connections. It
relies not on mouse-cleverness
to learn a maze, imprinting on
rejuvenant forgetfulness,
but rules cemented from its dawn
of consciousness to solve each maze
and then to build them.
Minds are thus
conservative, each rodent craze
for novelty a heedless fuss.
In time, our aging neurons die–
more human, that, than multiply.
Thanks to both critics. @Richard - tried to implement all or most of your fine suggestions. @alexorande - why tetrameter? Just because... the subject seemed too light for IP until the final couplet-- and by then it was too late
. Big and pointless explain below.
Unregenerate Humanity
We learn that unlike rats’ or crows’
our adult neurons never split
to generate new cells: mind grows
by forming fresh connections. It
relies not on mouse-cleverness
to learn a maze, imprinting on
rejuvenant forgetfulness,
but rules cemented from its dawn
of consciousness to solve each maze
and then to build them.
Minds are thus
conservative, each rodent craze
for novelty a heedless fuss.
In time, our aging neurons die–
more human, that, than multiply.
Thanks to both critics. @Richard - tried to implement all or most of your fine suggestions. @alexorande - why tetrameter? Just because... the subject seemed too light for IP until the final couplet-- and by then it was too late
. Big and pointless explain below.
Non-practicing atheist

