Two Haikus (or attempts, anyway)
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I like the 2nd one best.
It's very visual with few words.
It's as though I am looking
from a 2nd or third story window.
I can see rooftops and all that colour!


-nibbed
there's always a better reason to love
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RE: Two Haikus (or attempts, anyway) - by ellajam - 01-27-2018, 08:47 PM
RE: Two Haikus (or attempts, anyway) - by ellajam - 01-27-2018, 09:22 PM
RE: Two Haikus (or attempts, anyway) - by ellajam - 01-27-2018, 09:31 PM
RE: Two Haikus (or attempts, anyway) - by nibbed - 01-28-2018, 11:03 AM



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