how to pick up hot chizzards curb-crawling the discussion pages

[vagabond]

at first he gave a thumbs up
to the screenshot of my ass
in pixellated glory
with an explanatory story
that i made like a mandala
creativersely like a lama
but he didn't make a pass
 
then he made a comment                 maybe somehow get rid of second "make/made"
innocent and quite prophetic
and  said something in passing                "made an offering in passing"?  
by casually remarking                                 you could add "quite" after "by" for rhythm
that he also made mandalas               
was a packhorse type of lama   
but was somewhat apathetic                    "driven somewhat apathetic"?
 
after chatting to him                                 "upon a chat of hours"?
in the forum about nothing
i accepted his request
and was really quite unstressed
 we were now steam friends                  
and we made our rear ends                   insert a "have" infront of " made"?
into chunky blocky somethings                 
 
in a multiple mandala
that we burst with pride for                  
and posted without thinking
after a night of heavy drinking           
in the screenshot section                        
and in the art collection                 "as an art collection"?
with a little bit of lore                              
 
he proposed on the general forum          
to the delight of the subscribers              "all" instead of "the"?
we ended up united
by a clergyman excited
to be streaming live on twitch
the couple he made hitched
now creativerse survivors

a fun read. i guess my suggestions sound mostly weird but don´t know for sure, i hope some are useful.