11-22-2017, 12:50 AM
Hi Quix and Achebe,
Thank you for your critiques. Made an edit. I'll answer some questions and comments below.
Is this a reference to an actual place, or an actual fictional place from a story book?
No, purely made-up name. Though I'm pretty sure there are names of places--real or imaginary--out there that are identical or similar, it'd be coincidental.
i'm visualizing gnomes here, yes? Something like?
Correct
I can't help visualizing Tasha Tudor's Corgiville here and wonder if that is intentional, or merely happenstance? Either, way, I love this image!
Merely happenstance, and thank you!
apostrophe not needed after scarecrows
of course, dunno what I was thinking lol
..........hard to picture acorns in the shape of etc - why not just “scattered / like dragon etc”?
they're scattered in the shape of dragon footprints. kinda like saying "the party cups were arranged in sets of triangles". I'm not understanding how I should reword this
Best, Alex
Thank you for your critiques. Made an edit. I'll answer some questions and comments below.
Is this a reference to an actual place, or an actual fictional place from a story book?
No, purely made-up name. Though I'm pretty sure there are names of places--real or imaginary--out there that are identical or similar, it'd be coincidental.
i'm visualizing gnomes here, yes? Something like?
Correct
I can't help visualizing Tasha Tudor's Corgiville here and wonder if that is intentional, or merely happenstance? Either, way, I love this image!
Merely happenstance, and thank you!
apostrophe not needed after scarecrows
of course, dunno what I was thinking lol
..........hard to picture acorns in the shape of etc - why not just “scattered / like dragon etc”?
they're scattered in the shape of dragon footprints. kinda like saying "the party cups were arranged in sets of triangles". I'm not understanding how I should reword this
Best, Alex