A Constant Call to My Fall
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What is the delayed response about? Is that an extension of the poem? I'll avoid commenting on it for now.

I see in other versions the line 'between me and god' is isolated and the newest version is not. Was this intentional or is this an error? I personally find it to be more appealing isolated. It provides more of an impact and makes it feel far more important.
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