08-09-2017, 07:02 AM
(07-29-2017, 08:11 AM)Devante Wrote: The first six lines are confusing, I'm like "What?!", A more expansion of thought would help here. Also the first 6 lines kinda interrupted me from finishing the rest of the poem.
Hi Devante. Thank you for replying to my poem.
You know how poetry is, not everybody
understands and some folks write in the abstract.
I appreciate your consideration of critique
to my poem.
nibbed
there's always a better reason to love