A Constant Call to My Fall

A Constant Call to My Fall

Devante
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07-29-2017, 08:11 AM

The first six lines are confusing, I'm like "What?!", A more expansion of thought would help here. Also the first 6 lines kinda interrupted me from finishing the rest of the poem.

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