A Constant Call to My Fall

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Hi vagabond

Thank you for taking time to read & critique my poem.
When I wrote it I was dealing with some oppression/a thorn
that often accompanies temptation...I suppose much of
my poetry is written through frustration, but I am working
on changing that. I just have to keep in mind that because I
belong to God nothing I can do or say can make Him love me
any less or any more. His love is unconditional. I just forget
sometimes.

Thank you kindly for your words of encouragement and critique.



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