07-01-2017, 08:11 AM
Hi Qdeathstar. Unusual,but clever short form.
Attrition:
Of words bounced off
me and on to you.
We arent arent saying playing both arents need apostrophes
until we do. after.
We've crafted careful outs - I like the creative use of the line-through words, and what it does.
snarky innocents.
We are always right
I've asked her and she asked you.
We all agree we are clever.
Your words bounce off me
and into your skull
like a bullet.
Pull the trigger.
But it's not about you.
Each time I read it I got something else from it.
It's settled. I've decided it's someone lonely
who often talks to themself, and the unhealthy
choice of not loving or encouraging themself.
best regards
nibbed
Attrition:
Of words bounced off
me and on to you.
We arent arent saying playing both arents need apostrophes
until we do. after.
We've crafted careful outs - I like the creative use of the line-through words, and what it does.
snarky innocents.
We are always right
I've asked her and she asked you.
We all agree we are clever.
Your words bounce off me
and into your skull
like a bullet.
Pull the trigger.
But it's not about you.
Each time I read it I got something else from it.
It's settled. I've decided it's someone lonely
who often talks to themself, and the unhealthy
choice of not loving or encouraging themself.
best regards
nibbed
there's always a better reason to love

