05-14-2017, 05:13 PM
For only 4 lines I think this poem is pretty effective. You seem to suggest that most of the history which we are exposed to comes from those of the 'victors' with their own interests in mind. A bold but interesting statemet all the same. I really struggle with 'as true as any die'. The ambiguity really obscures all the lines that follow it. Perhaps you could clear this line up a little bit. Even though I don't completely understand the last line, it is still effective.