Histories

[dukealien]

Histories



Victors’ history, chock-full
of grand self-serving lies
is true as any die
compared to stories losers tell.

dukealian,

any die? or any dye?....I'm not sure how to take L3. Maybe omitting the conjunction at the beginning of L3 could enhance the read as well. anyway, I like it and hope my suggestions help.

Luna

To possibly alleviate confusion (though no reading is *wrong* - just what I was thinking when I wrote L3),

"as any" could be unpacked as, "you get to choose the very best one you can find, and the thing compared will be that good."  I.e., "straight as a ruler" would be an average ruler; straight as *any* ruler would be as straight as the best ruler you can present for comparison.

"true as [a] die" could be unpacked as, "true (square) as the best dice," or "like a machinist's die that cuts threads perfectly."  Gambling with dice is what it is; producing a good threaded bolt from a plain rod is magical.

Good suggestions, all.  Edit may result.