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I like how the thing fits the readers frame of mind/vision; any number of words could be use to end complete, yet seemingly incomplete lines. I'm reminded of grasshopper in Kung fu, just place "yes grasshopper" as the title, which I realise can't be done. The thought of it did make me smile though.
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< some day the sun will > - by rayheinrich - 09-23-2015, 03:20 PM
RE: < some day the sun will > - by Lizzie - 04-12-2017, 05:07 AM
RE: < some day the sun will > - by rayheinrich - 04-12-2017, 09:58 PM
RE: < some day the sun will > - by billy - 04-15-2017, 04:20 PM
RE: < some day the sun will > - by rayheinrich - 04-15-2017, 06:55 PM



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