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< robin's shadow >
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11-03-2016, 06:37 AM
Not a huge fan of the pic (not that she's unworthy of such attention), but there's no visual of the side smile described and I find that unsatisfying.
I agree with Dale that it's a stronger poem without the last two words, although RiverNotch's justification of them is poetry.
Meep meep.
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< robin's shadow > - by rayheinrich - 11-02-2016, 10:37 PM
RE: < robin's shadow > - by RiverNotch - 11-02-2016, 11:45 PM
RE: < robin's shadow > - by rayheinrich - 11-04-2016, 05:39 PM
RE: < robin's shadow > - by Erthona - 11-03-2016, 03:09 AM
RE: < robin's shadow > - by Bueller - 11-03-2016, 06:37 AM
RE: < robin's shadow > - by RiverNotch - 11-05-2016, 01:36 AM
RE: < robin's shadow > - by ellajam - 11-05-2016, 06:55 PM
RE: < robin's shadow > - by RiverNotch - 11-06-2016, 02:50 PM
RE: < robin's shadow > - by ellajam - 11-06-2016, 07:01 PM
RE: < robin's shadow > - by rayheinrich - 11-08-2016, 02:39 PM
RE: < robin's shadow > - by rayheinrich - 11-07-2016, 01:51 PM
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