10-08-2016, 06:24 AM
As a spoken word piece, or a rap, this will work really well. It's simple enough in its message, which is enhanced nicely by really good sonics and a strong rhythm. I was reciting it with an Eminem song in my head but I don't know which one (you know that thing where you hear the tune but you can't get the song because you've got other words in your head and they're messing with you? No? Just me then. More coffee.)
Personally I'd say you can cut some bullshit. Overusing it can reduce its power -- plus it's not a great word to say repeatedly as it just doesn't sit trippingly on the tongue and all that.
As long as the little bastards stop coming into my classroom so high they can't even sit on a chair straight, I'm all for legalisation.
Personally I'd say you can cut some bullshit. Overusing it can reduce its power -- plus it's not a great word to say repeatedly as it just doesn't sit trippingly on the tongue and all that.
As long as the little bastards stop coming into my classroom so high they can't even sit on a chair straight, I'm all for legalisation.
It could be worse