07-10-2016, 01:13 AM
how can we forget it's april?
thirty birthdays in a row—
thirty freedy krueger smiles,
thirty dirty girls, to go!
What is a Freddy Krueger smile? I take it its not pleasant. lol And why 30? Is this about a 30th birthday?
That's a lot of girls by the way. lol
how can we forget it's april?
vodka toniced broken sluts,
walking to the bar on crutches—
christmas didn't hurt so much!
I am not sure what level of critique is appropriate for this forum. But I just didn't understand how Christmas fit in.
how can we forget it's april?
sticky threesomes. . . spiders. . . hell;
how can we forget it's april?
dear god, can we skip may, as well?
Sounds like April is a crazy month for the speaker. Threesomes, spiders, hell, dirty girls and Freddy Kreuger. That is a lot for one month! Honestly I am not sure I get this poem at all.. But maybe it doesn't matter and no one is supposed to get it.
thirty birthdays in a row—
thirty freedy krueger smiles,
thirty dirty girls, to go!
What is a Freddy Krueger smile? I take it its not pleasant. lol And why 30? Is this about a 30th birthday?
That's a lot of girls by the way. lol
how can we forget it's april?
vodka toniced broken sluts,
walking to the bar on crutches—
christmas didn't hurt so much!
I am not sure what level of critique is appropriate for this forum. But I just didn't understand how Christmas fit in.
how can we forget it's april?
sticky threesomes. . . spiders. . . hell;
how can we forget it's april?
dear god, can we skip may, as well?
Sounds like April is a crazy month for the speaker. Threesomes, spiders, hell, dirty girls and Freddy Kreuger. That is a lot for one month! Honestly I am not sure I get this poem at all.. But maybe it doesn't matter and no one is supposed to get it.