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Sweat -- edit 2
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05-31-2016, 04:16 AM
The sweat is not from heat, it's from anxiety. The phrase "breaking out into a cold sweat" is too common to have used in the poem (while it would have been clearer), but the physiological phenomena of becoming cold and sweating when the fight-or-flight response is triggered is a universal one.
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Sweat -- edit 2 - by Lizzie - 05-28-2016, 09:16 AM
RE: Sweat -- short poem - by QDeathstar - 05-28-2016, 11:35 AM
RE: Sweat -- short poem - by Lizzie - 05-28-2016, 01:40 PM
RE: Sweat -- short poem - by Leanne - 05-29-2016, 05:56 AM
RE: Sweat -- short poem - by billy - 05-29-2016, 12:16 PM
RE: Sweat -- short poem - by Lizzie - 05-30-2016, 09:01 AM
RE: Sweat, edit 1 - by RiverNotch - 05-31-2016, 12:40 AM
RE: Sweat, edit 1 - by Lizzie - 05-31-2016, 04:16 AM
RE: Sweat, edit 1 - by RiverNotch - 05-31-2016, 07:20 PM
RE: Sweat, edit 1 - by Todd - 06-01-2016, 02:11 AM
RE: Sweat, edit 1 - by Lizzie - 06-01-2016, 11:06 AM
RE: Sweat -- edit 2 - by Lizzie - 11-26-2016, 06:22 PM
RE: Sweat -- edit 2 - by Achebe - 11-27-2016, 04:46 AM
RE: Sweat -- edit 2 - by Lizzie - 12-02-2016, 10:34 AM
RE: Sweat -- edit 2 - by RiverNotch - 12-02-2016, 08:57 PM
RE: Sweat -- edit 2 - by Lizzie - 12-03-2016, 05:55 AM
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