lemonade

[shemthepenman]

really enjoyed the punk of the poem shem like the gritty sounds, oh and I quite liked the hurdy gurdy of Freedy krueger its sounds like Jamie Lee Kurtis on the train in Trading Places..made me smile

aw, thanks. yeah, the freedy thing, i didn't hear it like that. it is pretty funny. em, trouble is, if i were to leave it, it just looks like a spelling mistake [which it was]. if only there were a way to indicate intention behind the misspelling i would gladly keep it. having said that, i wrote this in about three minutes while slightly tipsy, so i am not sure how invested i am in it. but any suggestion is welcome.