01-18-2016, 10:47 AM
(01-18-2016, 10:17 AM)rowens Wrote: People like reading books of these episodic, conversational narratives. Specific details you decided to stick in make it interesting. The lines break and move along in a gloomy, careless, Eeyore kind of way, which isn't quite as bad as that description might sound.You know, when I was writing it, I thought it might work better as prose, with honesty being more of an idea than an emotion. I wasn't sure if the sludginess of it was going to take away from the reading or not, so thanks!