04-27-2015, 06:34 AM
I really love how you are writing about being in a block, but it is so poignant that it is in actuality a very amazing poem. I also think this poem could be applied to other things. As writers, or those who like to dabble in writing, we here tend to jump to the writing interpretation. I also think it stands as a good metaphor for any other type of block, such as a hard decision or something you don't want to say, an idea that you need to have but wont come to you. Some of the meter does sound a little forced, as does the rhyme, but i never deal too much in those things so i wouldn't know what to suggest to fix it. Overall, great piece 
Sometimes I feel like writing poetry and sometimes I watch Netflix. No judging.