Backlit Nature

[hopefularahant]

I understand so much how you feel about alliteration. I abuse it so much myself because tongue twistings so fun, but my poetry is so rarely about fun so I lose out generally!

One thing that stuck out I thought I would mention..

Sweet singers perch on vantage points,
Ruffling plumage proud.
Silky syllables, meaningless,
"Unless they're hear aloud."
-Maybe supposed to be 'heard'? But then the other feeling is that everything is heard aloud?

First, Thanks for reading/ commenting on my poem! And to address your question, i suppose there is no real written form or repeatable form of a bird singing. If youre not there to hear it, you miss it. Thats what i was attempting to capture.