the pond - Trying Haiku

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the pond - Trying Haiku

monmac
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02-07-2015, 08:49 PM

Full edited version below Of this haïku

Dry baked water edge,
skimmer breaks nature's mirror.
Dissolving landscape

Original version --
Crystal clear water ripples
From a sun dried smooth shaped stone
Deftly skimmed across

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the pond - Trying Haiku - by monmac - 02-07-2015, 08:49 PM

RE: the pond - by ellajam - 02-07-2015, 09:19 PM

RE: the pond - by monmac - 02-08-2015, 05:36 AM

RE: the pond - by ellajam - 02-08-2015, 05:43 AM

RE: the pond - Trying Haiku - by monmac - 02-08-2015, 06:47 AM

RE: the pond - Trying Haiku - by just mercedes - 02-08-2015, 06:59 AM

RE: the pond - Trying Haiku - by Erthona - 02-09-2015, 08:27 AM

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