01-20-2015, 05:18 AM
DUDE. Beautiful.
the air
re-embers
and I see
your apron.
This is minimalism at its best.
It makes me envision seeing my mom crying over the dishes in the kitchen sink...when the love of her life had failed her, night after night. It is amazing that your 20-21 words could spark that memory in a stranger...proof of a universal experience/world of shared emotions. I would not change. A. WORD. Very serious about this.
the air
re-embers
and I see
your apron.
This is minimalism at its best.
It makes me envision seeing my mom crying over the dishes in the kitchen sink...when the love of her life had failed her, night after night. It is amazing that your 20-21 words could spark that memory in a stranger...proof of a universal experience/world of shared emotions. I would not change. A. WORD. Very serious about this.